Brett DeFries, "The Great American Novel"

A response to James Gouldthorpe

The heart as it looked at the sow

whose it was

                      the rifle butt above it

the milker underneath the dripping

house

              the dripping revolver

the eyeless folks

                            the eyeless beasts

all synchronize to kill "and then"

"and then"

                  which dialogue loves

so the sow doesn't speak

                                      she faces

her heart

               the gun doesn't melt

born strangled

                         the duck never lived

the legible words

                            (the zoom not

enough)

                "competitor"

                                  "match"

but there is no sequence

                                       there is

no sight

there is no speech

                               and there is

  

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Process Notes

What strikes me about Gouldthorpe's fascinating "Great American Novel" is not narrative but simultaneity. That each image is all-at-once with the others, no one depending on another's cause, indicates that any narrative is one the viewer must supply to fill the causal gaps. Did the men beneath the revolver pull its trigger to kill some person or animal? Did an unpainted someone kill those men with the revolver? Or is the men's only relationship to the revolver one of nearness on a wall of painted images? Did the sighted rifle kill the sow? That would be strange and superfluous, though what I see is a sow facing a heart (its own?) beneath a sighted rifle. Rather than suggest a narrative, I did my best to let the painting—not it's representation—narrate itself. When I give up the desire to narrate "The Great American Novel," I see things existing simultaneously with others, no one acting on an other, but all of them acting on me, the also active viewer.

Brett DeFries

Brett DeFries' poems have appeared or are forthcoming in FENCE, Colorado Review, New Orleans Review, Konundrum Engine Literary Review, Best American Experimental Writing (Omnidawn 2014)and elsewhere. A chapbook was published by New Delta Review in 2012.  He is currently a PhD candidate in English literature at the University of Iowa.